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First Draft
Once upon a time, there was a black bear named Jasper, who had always dreamed of running in a seven-appendaged race. One day, he saw a flyer advertising a huge one!!!🤩! But there was one problem: he didn’t have a partner. He ran around the forest looking for a partner, but he scared everyone away! Finally, Jasper came to a small clearing, there he found a brown bear named Harold that also didn’t have a partner for the race. The next morning they went to the race and won first prize!
THE END
Second Draft
Once upon a time, there was a black bear named Jasper, who had always dreamed of running in a seven-appendaged race. One day, he saw a flyer advertising a huge one!!!🤩! But there was one problem: he didn’t have a partner. He ran around the forest looking for a partner, but he scared everyone away! Finally, Jasper came to a small clearing; there he found a brown bear named Harold, who also didn’t have a partner for the race. The next morning, they went to the starting line and tied up one leg from each of them. They were determined to win, so they did.
THE END
Once upon a time, there was a black bear named Jasper, who had always dreamed of running in a seven-appendaged race. One day, he saw a flyer advertising a huge one!!!🤩! But there was one problem: he didn’t have a partner. He ran around the forest looking for a partner, but he scared everyone away! Finally, Jasper came to a small clearing, there he found a brown bear named Harold that also didn’t have a partner for the race. The next morning they went to the race and won first prize!
THE END
Second Draft
Once upon a time, there was a black bear named Jasper, who had always dreamed of running in a seven-appendaged race. One day, he saw a flyer advertising a huge one!!!🤩! But there was one problem: he didn’t have a partner. He ran around the forest looking for a partner, but he scared everyone away! Finally, Jasper came to a small clearing; there he found a brown bear named Harold, who also didn’t have a partner for the race. The next morning, they went to the starting line and tied up one leg from each of them. They were determined to win, so they did.
THE END
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