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First Draft

My favorite activity of all time is this SUPER-FUN video game called  Dan The Man. It has all these different levels and maps, and each map has a ending boss that you have to beat to get to the next map. The final boss is super hard to defeat, even me, the guy who got to the final level, hasn’t beat it. 

There are also these extension packs you can get that are really hard. The Prologue is the first map, and the boss is really easy to defeat. The Countryside is the second map and the boss is still easy to defeat. The Castle is the third map, and the boss requires some practice to defeat. Then there’s The Sewer, where you have to defeat the Dark Master.  The final map is Under Construction, where the final boss lies.

Second Draft

My favorite activity of all time is this SUPER-FUN video game called “Dan The Man.” It has all these different levels and maps, and each map has a ending boss that you have to beat to get to the next map. The final boss here is a giant robot who is super hard to defeat. Even me, the guy who got to the final level, hasn’t beat it. 

There are also extension packs you can get that are really hard. The Prologue is the first map, and the boss is super easy to defeat. The Countryside is the second map, and the boss is still easy to defeat. The Castle is the third map, and the boss requires some practice to defeat. Then there’s The Sewer, where you have to defeat the Dark Master. The final map is Under Construction, and that is where the final boss lies. All in all, this game is 😎 because it’s fun to hone your skills and beat increasingly difficult levels.

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