Homework: CANDY!!!!!!!🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍬🍬🍬🍬🍭🍭🍭🍬🍬🍬

First Draft
I have created a new kind of candy! It is called a Sugarscape. It is a landscape made of candy! The root beer ocean is populated by sugarspun sharks, the chocolate trees bear Jolly Ranchers in their chewing gum leaves, and gummy bears patrol the marzipan hills. They are purchased in large boxes, but in peices. You must assemble it how the instructions tell you. Of course, you can buy different kinds, including, but not limited to, Hawain Beach, Artic Blizzard, and City Skyline.    

Second Draft
I have created a new kind of candy! It is called a Sugarscape. It is a landscape made of candy! The root beer ocean is populated by sugarspun sharks, the chocolate trees bear Jolly Ranchers in their chewing gum leaves, and gummy bears patrol the marzipan hills. Sugarscapes are purchased in large boxes, but in pieces. You must assemble the candy as the instructions guide you. Of course, you can buy different kinds, including, but not limited to, Hawaiin Beach, Arctic Blizzard, and City Skyline.

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