Homework: 🐹

Draft 1

Once upon a time there was a fluffy hamster named Fluffy that lived in a house on the countryside. One day, his owner got a dog! The dog took over Fluffy’s beloved playground! Fluffy had to stop the dog, so he came up with a plan. The next night, he grabbed some dog treats and spelled out a message on the kitchen floor: CAN YOU PLEASE KEEP THE DOG OUT OF MY PLAYGROUND? In the morning, the owner saw the message and decided to build the dog it’s own playground. Fluffy was so happy, he practically jumped out skin when he saw it!

Draft 2

Once upon a time there was a fluffy hamster named Fluffy who lived in a house in the countryside. One day, much to Fluffy’s dismay, his owner got a dog! The dog even took over Fluffy’s beloved playground! Fluffy had to stop the dog, so he came up with a plan. 

The next night, he grabbed some dog treats and spelled out a message for his owner on the kitchen floor: “CAN YOU PLEASE KEEP THE DOG OUT OF MY PLAYGROUND?” 

In the morning, the surprised owner saw the message and decided to build the dog its own playground. Fluffy was so happy, he practically jumped out of his skin when he saw it!