Homework: Kitties
Draft 1
Once upon a time there was a family of rabbits that were going on a picnic. It was a sunny day on the countryside, but suddenly a tornado formed right behind them! They ran for cover, but got picked up anyway! After a few minutes, the tornado calmed down, so they landed. Once they found each other, they had lost the kid!
Jasper landed in a pile of leaves. He looked around him. He saw a barn and a house. Well I better get shelter he remarked, even though he was scared out of his mind. Soon he made it to the barn. Where he found a lot of animals. Are you okay asked the chicks. No he said . You can stay with us said the cow. Yes he said
Draft 2
Once upon a time there was a family of rabbits that were going on a picnic. Their names were Mom, Dad, and Jasper. It was a sunny day on the countryside, but suddenly a tornado formed right behind them! They ran for cover, but got picked up anyway! After a few minutes, the tornado calmed down, so they landed. Once the adults found each other, they realized they had lost Jasper!
In fact, Jasper had landed far away in a pile of leaves. He looked around him and saw a barn and a house.
“Well I better get shelter,” he remarked, even though he was scared out of his mind. Soon he made it to the barn, where he found a lot of animals.
“Are you okay?” asked the chicks.
“No,” he replied.
“You can stay with us!” said the cow.
“OK,” he said. He was unaware at the time, but this was the start of his new life!
Once upon a time there was a family of rabbits that were going on a picnic. It was a sunny day on the countryside, but suddenly a tornado formed right behind them! They ran for cover, but got picked up anyway! After a few minutes, the tornado calmed down, so they landed. Once they found each other, they had lost the kid!
Jasper landed in a pile of leaves. He looked around him. He saw a barn and a house. Well I better get shelter he remarked, even though he was scared out of his mind. Soon he made it to the barn. Where he found a lot of animals. Are you okay asked the chicks. No he said . You can stay with us said the cow. Yes he said
Draft 2
Once upon a time there was a family of rabbits that were going on a picnic. Their names were Mom, Dad, and Jasper. It was a sunny day on the countryside, but suddenly a tornado formed right behind them! They ran for cover, but got picked up anyway! After a few minutes, the tornado calmed down, so they landed. Once the adults found each other, they realized they had lost Jasper!
In fact, Jasper had landed far away in a pile of leaves. He looked around him and saw a barn and a house.
“Well I better get shelter,” he remarked, even though he was scared out of his mind. Soon he made it to the barn, where he found a lot of animals.
“Are you okay?” asked the chicks.
“No,” he replied.
“You can stay with us!” said the cow.
“OK,” he said. He was unaware at the time, but this was the start of his new life!
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